Changeset 32391 in vbox for trunk/doc

Timestamp:

Sep 10, 2010 11:18:08 AM (14 years ago)

Author:

vboxsync

Message:

doc/manual: typos, superfluous text.

File:

• trunk/doc/manual/en_US/user_AdvancedTopics.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

trunk/doc/manual/en_US/user_AdvancedTopics.xml

@@ -1355 +1355 @@
     core dump directory.</para>
 
-    <para>Next you need to specify when the VirtualBox CoreDumper should be
-    triggered. You can replace the system core dumper, or ask it to setup it's
-    core dumper for live, running processes without terminating the VM. This
-    is done using the following commands:</para>
+    <para>You must specify when the VirtualBox CoreDumper should be triggered.
+    This is done using the following commands:</para>
 
     <para><screen>VBoxManage setextradata "VM name" VBoxInternal2/CoreDumpReplaceSystemDump 1
@@ -1366 +1364 @@
 
     <para>Setting <computeroutput>CoreDumpReplaceSystemDump</computeroutput>
-    overrides the host's core dumping mechanism and in the event of any crash
-    only the VirtualBox CoreDumper would produced the core file.</para>
+    sets up the VM to override the host's core dumping mechanism and in the
+    event of any crash only the VirtualBox CoreDumper would produce the core
+    file.</para>
 
     <para>Setting <computeroutput>CoreDumpLive</computeroutput> sets up the VM
     to produce cores whenever the VM receives a
     <computeroutput>SIGUSR2</computeroutput> signal. After producing the core
-    file, the VM will not be terminated and will continue to run. You can thus
-    take cores of the VM process anytime using:</para>
+    file, the VM will not be terminated and will continue to run. You can then
+    take cores of the VM process using:</para>
 
     <para><screen>kill -s SIGUSR2 &lt;VM-process-id&gt;</screen></para>