Changeset 44122 in vbox for trunk/doc/manual/en_US

Timestamp:

Dec 13, 2012 4:39:22 PM (12 years ago)

Author:

vboxsync

Message:

doc/manual: update privacy policy chapter, making clear that the Oracle privacy policy applies and that the other details are just additional information what data is used

File:

• trunk/doc/manual/en_US/user_PrivacyPolicy.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

trunk/doc/manual/en_US/user_PrivacyPolicy.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
   "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
 <appendix id="privacy">
-  <title>VirtualBox privacy policy</title>
+  <title>VirtualBox privacy information</title>
 
-  <para>Policy version 4, Apr 22, 2010</para>
+  <para>Version 5, Dec 13, 2012</para>
 
-  <para>This privacy policy sets out how Oracle Corporation ("Oracle") treats
-  personal information related to the virtualbox.org website and the
-  VirtualBox application.</para>
+  <para>The Oracle Privacy Policies posted on
+  <ulink url="http://www.oracle.com/html/privacy.html">http://www.oracle.com/html/privacy.html</ulink>
+  apply to your personal data collected and used by Oracle. The following
+  privacy information describes in more detail which information is exchanged
+  between the VirtualBox application and Oracle, and which information is
+  collected by the virtualbox.org website.</para>
 
   <para><emphasis role="bold">§ 1 virtualbox.org.</emphasis> The
@@ -28 +31 @@
   <para><emphasis role="bold">§ 3 VirtualBox registration process.</emphasis>
   The VirtualBox application may ask that the user optionally register with
-  Oracle. in der If you choose to register, your name, e-mail address, country
-  and company will be submitted to Oracle and stored together with the IP
-  address of the submitter as well as product version and platform being used.
-  The standard Oracle Privacy Policies as posted on
-  http://www.oracle.com/html/privacy.html apply to this data.</para>
+  Oracle. If you choose to register, your name, e-mail address, country and
+  company will be submitted to Oracle and stored together with the IP address
+  of the submitter as well as product version and platform being used.</para>
 
   <para><emphasis role="bold">§ 4 Update notifications.</emphasis> The
@@ -54 +55 @@
   or in connection with legal proceedings.</para>
 
-  <para><emphasis role="bold">§ 6 Updates.</emphasis> Oracle may update this
-  privacy policy by posting a new version on the virtualbox.org website. You
-  should check this page occasionally to ensure you are happy with any
+  <para><emphasis role="bold">§ 6 Updates.</emphasis> Oracle may update the
+  privacy policy at any time by posting a new version at
+  <ulink url="http://www.oracle.com/html/privacy.html">http://www.oracle.com/html/privacy.html</ulink> and the privacy information will be kept up to date
+  in the documentation which comes with the VirtualBox application. You
+  should check these places occasionally to ensure you are happy with any
   changes.</para>
 </appendix>